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So, after much mulling about, I *think* I've decided. Please give me your feedback.

 

Fletcher Admin

Targetting Your Success.

 

Logo will involve an arrow and/or target in some way

 

(Fletcher = someone who makes arrows. arrows shoot at target..... just to explain the thought pattern). :)

 

Comments? Suggestions? :)

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So, after much mulling about, I *think* I've decided. Please give me your feedback.

 

Fletcher Admin

Targetting Your Success.

 

Logo will involve an arrow and/or target in some way

 

(Fletcher = someone who makes arrows. arrows shoot at target..... just to explain the thought pattern). :)

 

Comments? Suggestions? :)

 

I never knew what a fletcher was before...learn something new every day.

 

I think targeting should only have one "T" but other than that, I like it. You might want to be a bit more descriptive and saying Targeting Your Business Success or something like that.

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I think you have something. Stick with it. For the exact phrasing, try to get something that will make the most sense to your target market. They may not relate the fletcher thing (I love the way many names come from occupations held centuries ago).

 

My mother use to tell us not to be under her feet. My tag line is Working at your side; not under your feet. I wanted it to say 'Working ON your side' thinking that the clients would 'get' it that i was on their side, ready to stand for them. But, a wise daughter pointed out that they probably wouldn't be following my defense train of thought, but could more easily see it as poor grammar. The client only wants someone beside them (at your side) and doesn't care if I am ready to stand for them in the beginning at least.

 

The market and clients are the ones for whom this has to work for the most.

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