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I posted a similar question under the specialties board but I wanted to make sure my question hit the right audience.


I am developing my business and working on defining the services I want to provide to my target market, which is small childcare facilities and home run businesses.


Here is my service plan thus far:

  1. Licensing Assistance (for local businesses): Developing an action plan to apply for state and county licensing, and developing a quality assurance to program to continually meet licensing requirements.
  2. Administrative Assistance: Gathering registration, physical exams, and contact information forms for children in the facility as well as staff, updating these forms, and organizing and managing this information (included contracts, confidentiality, and photo permission forms)
  3. Basic Bookkeeping and Invoicing: Setting up payment system, invoicing clients for childcare services
  4. Childcare Services Enhancement: Creating and utilizing forms such as Daily Sheets, Developing and implementing educational curriculum, menu planning, and parent newsletters.

So what do you think? Are they defined enough or need to specification? Are they too broad or narrow? Am I trying to do too much just starting out or do I offer a good variety of services? Your professional criticisms are much welcomed.

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nrmctheny Your services are fine, they are short and to the point,defines the what is it well, what we need to know, is compared to others doing the same thing, what makes you so unique?also,list pricing in your service,people not only want to know what it is, but also; how much does it cost.

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